and living those oh-so-similar days
But the rains are new
the flowers are here too
......then why is there the same weather in me !
Go on ma chere dance in the rain
wash yourself a-new
o'w...a....i....t
Did you 'hear' the flower blooming !
did you 'see' the cool breeze !
......and nearby some-whe-re
did you feel a butterfly emerging !
Note: i start writing feeling all lonely and end up finding some hope on the way to the end......that invariably happens to me. So that notion about 'hearing' the flower blooming and 'seeing' the breeze were all about heightened senses which you all must have experienced when you feel you are on the brink of an amazing discovery or something. I just wanted to convey the anxiety and the idea of stepping onto something lovely...very soon,hence the single quotes,because they aren't real !
But then why did i not single quote the (feel) in metamorphosis ! You people have the guess.
4 comments:
I do hear the flower blooming and see the cool breeze all here in your metaphors of metamorphosis.
Very nice expressive writing.
Thank you :)
Very nice picture collection, once again!
You may be right about that transcendental feeling when you are on that verge of discovering something great. Sadly, I am yet to feel something like that. :(
i dint say great vicky i said amazing...!....lovely...! it can be simple discoveries like my hair looking shiny and beautiful today,or my potted bougainvillea fiinnnnally blooming ! i am sure something lik these do happen to u too ! i never expect great things from myself to be honest,if they do happen someday...il allow myself to be happily surprised :D again
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